check out my song lyric

Subject: check out my song lyric

gremlinpickledgizzy 20.02.23 - 01:56am
Pw your rap is rather cr*p, I suggest stick to eating a flapjack * +

shadow27 29.03.25 - 01:11am

@ xyah - 15.02.23 - 08:03pm
Davy, a good pal of mine wrote some lyrics . He is also big into his rap.
Here they are . Verdict please ?

I see her in my sleep
She walks the halls and calls to me
wild rose all alive with fire
Can I quench her desire?
Would I dare to grasp my only chance
try to shape her heart with these broken hands
even while her thorns make me bleed?
I know only oblivion can come
I'll chase her like the setting sun
but she evaporates like dew
I'm left with just another empty morning.